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All Deviations
All Deviations


I'm not okay
I never was
I have nothing to say
When you're always gone

I dream of flying
Of being free
I can't help you
When I can't save me

I'll put on my face
Let my hair down
I'll put up my case
But I won't make a sound

Like a thorn and a rose
Nothing is as sweet
As the blood on my hands
Or the coldness of sleet

I'll try to be happy
Leading two lives
I wish you could hear me
And not just the lies
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hmm...
nut much about this one...
y'know, i joined DA for the art, but then I started poetry...:confused: weird...
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~samuriboy:iconsamuriboy: May 15, 2008, 6:27:13 PM
wow thats deep very nice it has a soul as dose every real poem

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JUST DONT KILL ME
~fluff-pup-demon:iconfluff-pup-demon: May 15, 2008, 7:05:44 PM
wow, that means a lot to me! thanks! :hug:

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Hi, welcome to Ayu's insane asylum! :wave:
Can you be helped? :crazy:
~Ginichinaruffy:iconGinichinaruffy: May 15, 2008, 9:21:25 PM
Nice

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Kaichi - I fight for my cheese
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~fluff-pup-demon:iconfluff-pup-demon: May 15, 2008, 9:32:51 PM
thanks :D

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Hi, welcome to Ayu's insane asylum! :wave:
Can you be helped? :crazy:
~fluff-pup-demon:iconfluff-pup-demon: May 15, 2008, 9:32:58 PM
[link]

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Hi, welcome to Ayu's insane asylum! :wave:
Can you be helped? :crazy:
~Ginichinaruffy:iconGinichinaruffy: May 15, 2008, 9:56:22 PM
....
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Kaichi - I fight for my cheese
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~Ginichinaruffy:iconGinichinaruffy: May 15, 2008, 9:59:36 PM
:D

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Kaichi - I fight for my cheese
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~fluff-pup-demon:iconfluff-pup-demon: May 16, 2008, 3:31:57 PM
ooh...good for battle scene :wow:

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Hi, welcome to Ayu's insane asylum! :wave:
Can you be helped? :crazy:
~Ginichinaruffy:iconGinichinaruffy: May 16, 2008, 4:46:23 PM
Yup :D
[link] This one too

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Kaichi - I fight for my cheese
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