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I'm not okay
I never was
I have nothing to say
When you're always gone

I dream of flying
Of being free
I can't help you
When I can't save me

I'll put on my face
Let my hair down
I'll put up my case
But I won't make a sound

Like a thorn and a rose
Nothing is as sweet
As the blood on my hands
Or the coldness of sleet

I'll try to be happy
Leading two lives
I wish you could hear me
And not just the lies
©2008-2009 ~fluff-pup-demon
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hmm...
nut much about this one...
y'know, i joined DA for the art, but then I started poetry...:confused: weird...
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wow thats deep very nice it has a soul as dose every real poem

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JUST DONT KILL ME
wow, that means a lot to me! thanks! :hug:

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"Oh yeah? May you burn in bloody goldfish cracker hell then! DX<"
Nice

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マルス - 今回は僕の勝ちだね
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I hate the loneliness but it loves me
thanks :D

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"Oh yeah? May you burn in bloody goldfish cracker hell then! DX<"
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"Oh yeah? May you burn in bloody goldfish cracker hell then! DX<"
....
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マルス - 今回は僕の勝ちだね
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I hate the loneliness but it loves me
:D

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マルス - 今回は僕の勝ちだね
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I hate the loneliness but it loves me
ooh...good for battle scene :wow:

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"Oh yeah? May you burn in bloody goldfish cracker hell then! DX<"
Yup :D
[link] This one too

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マルス - 今回は僕の勝ちだね
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I hate the loneliness but it loves me

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