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All Deviations
All Deviations


Dreamer Dreamer
Do you see her?
Standing there alone?
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you miss her?
She's far away from home
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you want her?
As she's staring at the waves
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you keep her?
She's been lost for days and days
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you hate her?
She's waiting for you again
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you ask her?
She's asking herself when
So dreamer dreamer
I know you see her
Because I see her too
Dreamer dreamer
Please release her
From the prison that is you



The rain is falling now
dreamer dreamer
The sun will never shine
So dreamer dreamer
When will you save her
From the path that made her blind?
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I started out saying dreamer dreamer...
then I started rhyming...
it's been on my mind for weeks, I've just never felt like writing something for it >>;;;
hope you like!:D
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~Ginichinaruffy:iconGinichinaruffy: May 16, 2008, 4:53:04 PMComment hidden by Owner
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~CraneWonkaVampire:iconCraneWonkaVampire: Aug 16, 2008, 10:09:34 PM Mood: Adoration
this is really cool. i like the rhyme pattern. very nice.

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~fluff-pup-demon:iconfluff-pup-demon: Aug 16, 2008, 10:14:59 PM
Why thank you! That makes me happy thanks :aww:
You get a cookie! :cookie:

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