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Dreamer Dreamer
Do you see her?
Standing there alone?
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you miss her?
She's far away from home
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you want her?
As she's staring at the waves
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you keep her?
She's been lost for days and days
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you hate her?
She's waiting for you again
Dreamer Dreamer
Do you ask her?
She's asking herself when
So dreamer dreamer
I know you see her
Because I see her too
Dreamer dreamer
Please release her
From the prison that is you



The rain is falling now
dreamer dreamer
The sun will never shine
So dreamer dreamer
When will you save her
From the path that made her blind?
©2008-2009 ~fluff-pup-demon
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I started out saying dreamer dreamer...
then I started rhyming...
it's been on my mind for weeks, I've just never felt like writing something for it >>;;;
hope you like!:D
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マルス - 今回は僕の勝ちだね
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I hate the loneliness but it loves me
this is really cool. i like the rhyme pattern. very nice.

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We attack at dawn. And by dawn I mean three in the afternoon.
Why thank you! That makes me happy thanks :aww:
You get a cookie! :cookie:

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"Oh yeah? May you burn in bloody goldfish cracker hell then! DX<"
I like it very much ^^ It paints vivid pictures in my mind. :heart:

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Someone once said that the thing you're looking for is always in the last place you look, but it's kind of like, go figure! If you found it, why look more?

"We shall call it... Destiny!"
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was actually one my favorite poems to write. ;D :hug:

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"Oh yeah? May you burn in bloody goldfish cracker hell then! DX<"

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